GarVez Ficlets: From Season 16 by Pari
Summary: Just a like moment between Luke and Penelope at the end of Criminal Minds Evolution's 2nd episode (Season 16, Episode 2). Yes, this is a one-off fic, I may continue writing ficlets from this season.
Categories: General Characters: Luke Alvez, Penelope Garcia
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None, Sexual Content
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 6508 Read: 3148 Published: Nov 25, 2022 Updated: Dec 03, 2022
Story Notes:
I revised the title because I will probably be adding more to this one :)

You can listen to the fic as an audiobook by clicking HERE!

1. Chapter 1 by Pari

2. Chapter 2 by Pari

3. Chapter 3 by Pari

Chapter 1 by Pari
The chime on her phone surprised her given the hour, she checked the time on her phone to see it showed that the time was 9:12 pm. She finally opened the doorbell app and frowned up in confusion at the smirking face staring back at her. She moved to the door, unlocked it, and flung the door wide open.

“What do you want now, Luke?” She asked with a slight growl as she squinted her eyes at him suspiciously. In reply, he crossed the threshold even without a verbal invite. She closed the door, locked it, and then turned to watch him. He moved his hands from behind his back to reveal a bag of food in one hand, and a bottle of her favorite wine in the other.

“I brought you dinner,” Luke said with his smirk still in place as he moved to the counter and began setting out their food.

“I said I wanted lunch,” Penelope countered as she took steps toward him.

“I know, but I was in the neighborhood and I was hungry. And then I started thinking that maybe you might be hungry too,” He offered but at seeing her disbelieving gaze he decided to confess. “All right, I was worried about you so I wanted to stop by and check on you,” He finally admitted, and her stance and the hard glare she had been casting at him since he walked in immediately softened.

“That was nice of you, but you didn’t have to do that,” Penelope spoke kindly as she moved to the food and was pleasantly surprised to see it was a tray of her favorite pasta meal from her favorite Italian restaurant. She then moved around the counter and to the cupboard where she kept the glasses. She grabbed two glasses and moved back around to where Luke was now seated at the counter. She took the stool next to his and silently grasped the plastic fork he held out to her and started to stir the food around, while he poured them some of the wine.

“How are you holding up? You know, after these last couple of days being back at the BAU?”

“Firstly, I am not ‘back’, back at the BAU. I am just on loan for this one and only case,” She clarified as she pointed her left pointer finger at him, and Luke hurriedly nodded his understanding. “And secondly, I will admit that last night was … rough,” She could see the instant concern cross his handsome face a second before the scowl marred it. “I had a couple of nightmares that kind of kept me up. It’s been three years since I’ve had to see such gory pictures, and the ones from this case are the goriest I think I have ever seen before.”

“I’m so sorry, Penelope,” Luke said gently and so sincerely she looked over at him. He reached over his left hand and rubbed it across her back. “I’m sorry I broke my promise to you and pulled you back into our cases. That was selfish of me, and if you need to stop now, I will respect that.”

“No, it’s okay,” She replied with a small smile as she dropped her eyes from his and focused back down on her plate. “I want to help and know you wouldn’t have asked if you didn’t really need my help.”

“No, I was actually being mostly selfish. I mean, we do need your help and are grateful for it, of course, but,” Luke admitted and Penelope frowned a little in confusion as she looked back over at him. “I’ve really missed you,” He said with a slight shrug of his shoulders and the smile was quickly back on her face. “I know we facetime every once in a while, but it’s not the same and it’s not enough, you know?” She quietly nodded her head and she did know exactly what he meant because she had missed him as well. “I gotta tell you, your jabs at me work best face-to-face,” Luke teased with a chuckle and she giggled along with him.

“I’ll keep that in mind and I'll make sure to schedule a weekly lunch date with you just so I can insult you,” Penelope said jokingly.

“I really wish you would,” He happily agree with a gracious smile. “But mostly,” His look grew somber again as he regarded her while he continued to speak. “I miss feeling your bubbly energy and seeing your beautiful face,” Luke declared and Penelope gasped slightly in surprise. “Did I say something wrong?” He questioned aloud as he noticed her surprise and rigid shoulders.

“No, it’s just …” Penelope stumbled over her words as she contemplated whether she wanted to broach this subject with him. She instantly feared it might lead to an embarrassing outcome that would no doubt make her further distance herself from him. “You think I’m beautiful?” She asked wearily as she side-eyed him to gauge his facial expression without looking at him head-on.

“Yes, I do,” He replied with a nod. “Because you are very beautiful, inside and out,” After a few seconds he spoke again. “Penelope, look at me please,” He coaxed and she slowly turned her head and locked her eyes on his. Then her eyes widened a little as she watched him lift his left hand and cup the right side of her face. “I think you’re gorgeous and so fucking sexy, and I’ve thought so from the second I laid eyes on you.”

“You have?” Penelope squeaked out in a shaky voice as shock filled her.

“Yes, I have and your not-so-nice attitude toward me, in the beginning, didn’t deter those thoughts. In fact, it just made you hotter and made me want you even more.”

“You …” She gulped down the lump in her throat before she continued. “Wanted me?”

“I said ‘want’,” He corrected her. “And yes, I did then and I still do now. Am I making you uncomfortable by telling you all this?” He asked as he stroked his thumb across her cheek. She could only shake her head no to the question in what she felt was a too surreal moment. “That’s good because,” He took a deep breath to calm his frayed nerves, and then he went on with his sentence. “I’d really like to kiss you.”

“Ri-right now?” She sputtered out still in shell shock from all the things he had confessed to her.

“Well, technically whenever I’m around you, but yeah, right now would be good too. I thought I’d finally get to kiss you on that wonderful night three years ago, but I was too nervous to try. I was sure I’d get a second chance at it on our second date but…”

“A pandemic hit and stopped the world for a couple of years,” Penelope finished for him and he nodded in concurrence.

“It took three years but here we are, on our second dinner date,” Luke stated. “So, may I kiss you, Penelope?” Her mouth fell open as a small smile of joy tugged at the corners of her mouth.

“Ye-yeah,” She finally pushed out as her smile widened and he cast her a matching smile.

“Yeah?” He repeated because he wanted to make sure she was really okay with things.

“Yeah,” She affirmed as she vigorously nodded her head, and his hand which was still cupping her cheek slid around to grasp the back of her neck. Luke then tugged her closer as he leaned over toward her, and then ever so softly pressed his lush lips against hers. Both sighed in their contented happiness and joy as they deepened their kiss. And they shared the same thought, that this was definitely worth the wait.




The End (or is it?)
End Notes:
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Chapter 2 by Pari
“Hey, can I talk to you for a second? I wanted to apologize for last night,” He said as she looked at every area in the conference room except where he stood looking at her intensely. He had anxiously waited until the others had left the room before he approached her.

“You don’t need to apologize, and frankly I wish you wouldn’t because it just makes the humiliation worse for me,” She rambled out as she clutched the notebook she held against her bosom. Her words brought an instant frown to his face as confusion filled his mind. “Let’s just forget last night ever happened and we can go back to being frienemies, all right?” She said and then moved to step around him, but he stilled her by gently grasping her arm.

“No, that’s not all right because I’ve never thought of you as my enemy and I don’t want to forget last night. Last night was amazing, Penelope,” He declared and it was now her turn to be confused, and her brows furrowed as she finally looked up at him. “And I thought you enjoyed last night too, was I wrong?” He questioned and wondered if he had misread things.

“Of course, I enjoyed last night, and I vividly recall telling you not to stop but you did stop and practically ran out the door,” She answered as she hugged herself as if to shield herself from the hurt that she felt after he had left.

“I left because I didn’t want to get too carried away,” He defended. “I thought things were moving too fast.”

“Too fast?” She repeated as her voice rose a little, but then she remembered where they were and then lowered her voice to a near whisper as she continued her words. “We’ve been doing, whatever this thing is we do, for three years now. Actually, longer than that if I’m being completely honest. Yeah, I admit I’ve had the hots for you for years now, shut it, and silently enjoy the moment,” She pushed out quickly and he said nothing but simply let a satisfied smile spread across his face at this acknowledgment from her. “Nothing with us has ever been fast, it’s always been slow-burning. So, why would you think last night was us moving too fast?”

“Well, ‘technically’ as you told your friend we only had one date before last night, and it was a great date which I had hoped we’d have more of, but the entire world came to a halt. And you kind of brushed me off whenever I called you after our date.”

“I wasn’t giving you the brush off I just got the impression from you that you weren’t that into me. It was like you came, you saw, it wasn’t all you thought it would be, and you left, never to return. I mean, you didn’t even give me a good night kiss after our date or tell me you wanted to see me again. You walked me to my door said you had a good time and gave me a hug. A hug, Luke,” She repeated with a look of disgust on her face. “And,” She pointed her finger at him as she continued. “You never even mentioned the date whenever we spoke afterward.”

“That’s because I got the impression from you that you didn’t want to talk about it,” He defended. “You were so nice to me during our date and then when I called you the next day you were so cold towards me. It was like during the date you completely removed that ‘armor’ you always seem to wear just for me, but then it was back on and you pushed me back at arm’s length again. So, I didn’t want to be presumptuous, and I thought maybe you didn’t ‘like me’, like me, as I like you. But last night,” He paused a moment and a mischievous smile graced his lips as some of the events of the previous night flashed in his mind. “Last night I discovered that you do really like me as I like you. And you don’t know how happy that made me, how wonderful that felt in here,” He placed his right hand against his chest over his heart. “And there was no way I was gonna fuck that up by letting my dick take control and doing something you were not ready for. I know in the heat of the moment it felt so good, and mami, I truly wanted you so badly. But I was afraid that in the morning-”

“I’d put back on my ‘armor’ and kick you out of my bed and toss you out of my house,” Penelope cut him off as she finally understood what his train of thought and actual fears were the night before.

“Yeah,” Luke confirmed as he nodded his head as her words were on point with what he had been worried about.

“All right, we’ve both been misreading things between us. So, what do we do now?” She questioned and he arched a brow in surprise at her question. “I mean we both admit that we like each other more than just friends slash frienemies,” She threw in that jab with a smirk and he rolled his eyes slightly but also smirked back. “So, what’s the next step? Do we go on more dates to determine if we want to pursue, a more exclusive relationship with each other?”

“Well, I already know that I want to pursue a completely exclusive relationship with you, but what about you?” He asked her nervously and she smiled slightly and blushed profusely while she nodded her head.

“Yeah, me too,” She agreed and he let out a relieved breath and smiled down at her. “Okay, so we see each other exclusively and get to know each other better, and … Damn it, Luke Alvez how long are you gonna make me wait for sex?” She asked in an exasperated tone. “Because I am ready and would gladly take you back to my apartment right now for some very hot and heavy sexcapades,” Luke’s eyes widened in shock at her bold words as he subconsciously licked his lips and then smiled. “I’m sorry if my bluntness shocks you but this pandemic has birthed a new side of me and I now understand that life is too precious and so short, and we shouldn’t waste it. Also, it’s been nearly 5 years since I’ve had sex with something not battery-operated, excluding these puppies,” She wiggled all of her fingers. “I like you, you like me. You said you want to have sex with me, and I want that too. So, when are we gonna do it?” She finished her words but it wasn’t Luke’s voice that filled the space, It was JJ’s.

“Uhm … Sorry,” She began and both Penelope and Luke turned to regard her. “I forgot my files,” She said with a knowing and amused smile on her face as she stepped to the table, grabbed up the files, and then exited back out without saying anything further. Luke then looked back to Penelope unsure if he should apologize for starting this particular conversation at work and then being busted.

“Oh, please,” Penelope rolled her eyes dramatically reading the concern written all over his face. “Like she isn’t gonna be the first person I call after we do the do if we ever do it,” She tacked on in a huffy tone and Luke laughed a little and quickly stepped right up to her before she got the wrong idea about why he was laughing. The smile left his face as he stood so close, they were touching chest to chest, and he then leaned down until his nose barely touched her nose.

“I think I might just fall in love with you, Penelope Garcia,” He said in a hushed tone and before she could let the shock from his words settle in her mind, she felt the softness of his lips against hers and the strength of his hands that wrapped around her. The kiss was the most gentle, sweet, and tender kiss she had ever experienced and she heard herself pant out a sated sigh when he finally pulled back from the kiss.

“Tonight, your place or mine?” Luke said and Penelope’s eyes fluttered a second as she recovered from the kiss. When she finally registered what he had said and what he meant, she became nervous but she hadn’t been lying when she said she wanted him and had for a long time now. But she pushed away any fleeting insecurities and fears about not being good enough. She discovered self-love and acceptance for who she was inside and out, and she had been living a carpe diem lifestyle since sheltering at home from the pandemic, and she found her new life and mindset suited her. So, she decided she would have what she was sure would be, mind-blowing sex with Luke Alvez and if afterward, they did decide it should be a one-time thing, she would have no regrets or hard feelings about it. She leaned up on her tip-toes which was necessary even in her heels, and she placed her hands on his shoulders, as he instinctively placed firm hands on her hips. She then pulled him into another kiss, but this one was deeper, and tastier, and relayed her desire for him. The way his hands moved to her ass and pressed her closer to the growing bulge in his pants told her she needed to stop. So, she reluctantly ended the kiss and stepped back, while he begrudgingly let her go.

“Tonight, my place,” She said and then made her way to the exit leaving Luke to catch his breath and try to talk down his erection.
Chapter 3 by Pari
She had been constantly checking the video camera of her doorbell every few seconds in anticipation of his arrival. So, when he finally arrived, he had been surprised when her front door flung open before he could even raise his hand to ring the bell.

“Hi,” Penelope greeted Luke around what he could see was a nervous smile. The meek, shy-looking woman standing before him now didn’t look the same as the vivacious, brazen woman from earlier that day. And he pondered if she now had second thoughts. He silently prayed that she didn’t.

“Hi,” Luke replied with a kind smile while he waited for her to move back some and invite him inside. After a few seconds of them just standing there with him still out in the hallway, and she at the threshold of her opened door, he lifted his hand to show that he had brought her a single long-stemmed Rose and her favorite bottle of wine. “I wasn’t sure about what I should bring…”

“Condoms,” She cut off his words and then grasped his arm and pulled him inside of her apartment. She then closed the door, locked it, and turned to face him. “Did you bring condoms?” He was stunned for a millisecond by her words but mostly by the sudden wanton gleam he now saw in her eyes.

“Uhm … Yeah I did,” He answered as he reached into his jacket pocket and pulled out a box of Trojan Magnum BareSkin lubricated condoms. She reached out and grasped the box from his hand and read the package.

“Ten in the pack,” Penelope read out loud as she arched a brow, and the corners of her mouth curved when she glanced up to look at him. “That’s a high goal to reach in one night, but I like a challenge,” She tossed a wink, smiled, then grabbed his free hand, and began to tug him toward the back of her apartment to her bedroom. Luke pulled from her grip and stopped. She turned to look at him in confusion while he moved to her kitchen island and settled the flower and bottle of wine on the countertop.

“Hey, can we slow down for a second?” Luke asked as he regarded her and he could see in her eyes that she was right at that moment mentally reaching for that cold armor. He didn’t want her to misunderstand his words so he stepped to her and gently cupped her face in his right hand and forced her to look up into his eyes. “No, I do not want to stop. I want to make love to you more than I could possibly express to you, Penelope. And I promise you once we start, I will not leave this apartment until you are thoroughly satisfied,” His words made her gulp, lick her suddenly dry lips, and give him a small smile and curt nod. “But the operative word there was ‘make love’ and that’s not something I rush through. I don’t want to be some tool for you because you’re tired of pleasuring yourself with battery-operated devices and your fingers,” He used her earlier words. “I’m not looking for a fuck and go encounter with you, so if that’s what you want to do here…”

“No, it’s not,” She quickly interjected in a slightly elevated tone and with panic-filled eyes. “I just don’t want to presume anything. And when it comes to guys who look like you
that’s usually all they want from me… Well, except for the ones who shoot me and try to kill me,” She said as she wrapped her arms around herself, and he felt her entire body shudder as she recalled that horrific moment in her life. When he had first heard about her being lured on a date only to be shot, he had been enraged and wanted to avenge her. And he had actually been thankful to God when he learned the guy who had harmed her had been killed by JJ. Luke stepped even closer into her space and now held her face in both of his hands. Penelope had to crane her neck to look at him.

“This won’t be casual for me,” He spoke low as he leaned down and brushed his lips against hers in a chaste kiss that he let deepen for a few seconds and then pulled back and rested his forehead on hers. “I have never ever done casual relationships or one-night stands. When I meet a woman that I am attracted to I ask them out. After we get to know each other and if I find myself falling for them, and can envision a future with them … Only then will I make love to them. And I can tell you that you check off all of those boxes for me and then some.”

“Stop making me love you, Luke Alvez,” She said as she played with similar words she had spoken to him before, but had transposed ‘like’ for ‘love’ as there was no doubt for either of them that their feelings for the other had grown.

“Never,” He smiled and replied in remembrance.

“Now, can we make love?” She asked timidly. She didn’t want to come across as desperate but inside she was overly excited and her stomach was filled with butterflies and knots. She had no way of knowing that Luke was in a near identical predicament from his desire to make love to her.

“Lead the way,” He replied with a smirk, and she smiled, stepped back from him, and pulled his hand into hers. He then entwined their fingers and allowed himself to be tugged to her bedroom.




Once they entered her bedroom they were enveloped in the glow and slight warmth of the three candles Penelope had lit in three corners of the room, which she had hoped would set the right ambiance. Luke truly appreciated her effort. He pulled her backward until her back was pressed snuggly against his chest, and he wrapped his arms around her midsection and buried his face into her neck. She tilted her head to the side to give him more access. Her eyes rolled shut and her mouth fell open in pleasure as he kissed, licked, and nibbled at the tender flesh on her neck. He freely roamed his hands over her elegant belly, hips, and breasts. He then moved his right hand around to gently squeeze her ass, while the other hand kneaded her left breast. His hand slid from her backside up to the zipper at the back of the white dress with a repeating pattern of red tulips printed all over it.
“May I?” He mumbled into her left ear lobe and then placed a soft kiss upon it.

“Yes,” She hummed out as her chest heaved up and down in sync with her heart drumming in her chest. “And please don’t feel the need to ask permission for every move you make. I will let you know if you do something that I don’t like,” She added, and needing no further coaxing he carefully pulled the zipper all the way down until the delicate porcelain skin on her back and the lacey fabric of the red bra she wore were exposed. He pushed the dress off her shoulders a bit and then he grasped her bare shoulders and turned her to finally face him once more. She took a few tentative steps back from him until she felt the comforter on her bed brush against her calf. She tossed the condoms she still held atop the bed and then moved her left hand up to her right shoulder and grasped the dress and pulled it down her right arm. Then with her right hand, she did the same on the left side, and she pulled the dress down until it was bunched at her waist. She shivered a little as she locked her eyes on Luke’s face as his eyes traced the movement of her hands before they settled on her bountiful breast contained in the red lacy bra. She noticed the way his mouth fell open slightly but then he snapped it shut. The muscles in his jaw clenched, and his Adam’s apple bobbed a few times as he swallowed. It was hard for her to read him, and she was unsure if what he was seeing pleased him or not, but she refused to allow her insecurities to stop her now. So, she pushed the dress down her hips and it crumpled around her feet. She stepped out of the dress and kicked it away with her red, open-toed stiletto heels. And there she stood in just her red lace bra, matching underwear, and garter belt, with red fishnet stockings attached.

“Fuck,” Luke hissed out as he stood staring awestruck. This time her insecurities got the better of her from what she perceived as displeasure from him, and she lifted her hands to try to cover herself. “Don’t!” He barked out in a demanding tone as he saw what her intentions were, and her hands stilled as she stared at him with widened eyes. “Please don’t cover yourself and hide from me,” He said in a more calm and composed voice. “You are so beautiful Penelope,” He stated and a bright red blush instantly started to spread across her neck and face.

“Thank you,” She said coyly.

“Uhm …” He started to speak, but paused and he had to swallow before he could go on. “Do you always wear a garter belt whenever you wear stockings?” He asked as his eyes continuously scanned up and down her body. She bunched her brow a little at the odd question but answered just the same.

“Yes, because I never could comfortably wear pantyhose.”

“Fuck,” He hissed out once more as he clamped his eyes shut. “Fuck, fuck, fuck,” He chanted out as the times over the years when he had secretly admired her stocking-clad legs flashed in his mind. The pressure in his pants increased at the knowledge that she had always been wearing a garter belt to keep her stockings up.

“Luke, what’s wrong?”

“Shhh,” He replied as he held up his right hand with one finger pointed upward. “Please, I just need a second or this is going to be over before I even get to touch you,” He declared as she finally noticed the impressively huge bulge in the crotch of his pants and a flattered and pleased smile graced her lips at his dilemma. She silently stood and waited for him to compose himself and make the next move. After a few more seconds he finally opened his eyes and roamed them over her frame once more.

“You good?” She asked around a smirk, and in reply, he hurriedly removed his jacket and let it fall right at his feet. He then yanked the black t-shirt he wore underneath from his body in one swoop motion as he moved to her. At his movement, she stumbled back and sat down on the bed as she gasped at how beautiful and chiseled his bare chest was. Now, it was her moment to openly appraise him in delight and try to not get overly excited by what she was seeing.

“Yeah, I’m good,” He announced as he stood before her. She smiled, nodded, and then lifted her right leg and reached her left hand over to remove her heeled shoe. Luke’s hand shot out to stop her, and he gently pushed her hand away as he dropped to his knees. He placed both of his hands on each of her thighs where he stroked them and then parted them until her legs were settled on either side of him.

“Keep them on,” He commanded.

“Okay,” She agreed and then moved her hand to unclasp the stockings from the garter belt, but again he stopped her.

“Those too,” He said as he moved his hands up her thighs until they reached the garter belt where he allowed his fingertips to brush across its lace before his hands trailed back down her thighs.

“Luke, if I don’t remove the stockings from the garter belt I can’t remove my underwear unless you just planned to move it to the side,” She suggested and he shook his head to the idea while he now locked his eyes to the flimsy lace that covered her center.

“I’ll buy you a new set, I promise,” He said, and before she could contemplate what he meant he reached down and tore away the garment from her hairless quim and then dipped the middle finger of his right hand just at the folds of her labia, and slid it upward until it flicked at her hardened clit. This invoked a long, low, needy moan from Penelope’s lips and she arched and tossed her head back against the bed. Then following her earlier instructions about not needing to ask for permission, he dropped his head in between her open thighs. He inhaled her sweet natural musk a second before he latched his mouth onto her center where he penetrated her with his tongue and then twirled it around her nub.

“Ahhh,” She cried out in a delightful surprise to his welcomed assault. She shot her left hand out and locked her fingers into his thick curls while her right hand fisted her bedding. Luke grunted and growled out his elation while he suckled and slurped on her slickened vulva. Her juices flowed in abundance. He drank and lapped it all up happily as it imprinted on his taste buds. He had never enjoyed this heady taste from any of his past partners. None had ever been bad tasting, in fact, they really had no distinctive taste as he could recall. But Penelope tasted of some kind of fruity nectar he knew he would never grow tired of having in his mouth. He began to suck on her core aggressively as his hunger for her intensified, and he gripped her legs and placed them over his shoulder which open her to him more. This made her cry out. “Stop, please, stop!” And he immediately did as she asked as he shot his head up and locked scared and concerned eyes onto her blotchy red face.

“What’s wrong, did I hurt you?” He asked apologetically as he wiped the back of his right hand across his wet face and became filled with fear that he may have been too aggressive with her.

“No,” She panted out as she shook her head at him. “No, that was amazing, my God, you don’t know how amazing that felt. But I am so close and I don’t want to come before … I just really want to feel you inside of me when I come, Luke,” She confessed and he heaved out a sigh of relief knowing he hadn’t caused her some sort of pain.

“All right,” Luke replied with a nod and he leaned back on his haunches and then stood. He then unbuttoned the dark jeans he wore and pushed them down his muscular legs. Once fully freed from the jeans he kicked them away. He took in the way she lay prone on her bed, prompted up on her elbows as she silently watched him in anticipation. And then he pulled down the black boxer briefs, he wore. He had absolutely no inhibitions about being naked in front of her because he knew he had been blessed with his sexual endowments and he worked hard to keep his body fit. “Sorry, this is always the most awkward part,” He said with a slight smile as he moved to retrieve the box of condoms from the bed, but Penelope quickly reached out and grabbed the box first.

“Allow me,” She said as she opened the box, pulled out one of the foiled wrappers, opened it, and then pulled out the lubricated rubber. She then slid from her bed down to her knees before him, and she looked up at him over the rim of the glasses she wore as she grasped his fully erect cock in her hands. When she licked her lips to moisten them Luke nearly lost control again. Then he saw her tongue dart out to lick the precum from the slit in the head of his dick, he sucked in a sharp intake of air and his eyes involuntarily squeezed shut. She sucked the head into her hot mouth and his eye snapped open again and locked onto her face. She watched him intensely as he watched her slowly slide her mouth up and down his long, thick member, as far as her throat would allow her before her gag reflex kicked in.

“Shit,” He gasped out as he fisted both hands at his side while his hip slowly thrust in harmony with her sucking on him. He struggled to stave off the near-crippling urge to grip her head and slam himself fully down her throat. “Fuck … Oh, baby, I’m not gonna last long if you don’t stop. Please, please I need to be inside of you right now,” He pleaded and she released him from her mouth with a sloppy pop. She then rolled the condom on making sure to leave a little space at the tip to hold his seed. He couldn’t wait any longer, and he wouldn’t allow them to get situated on her queen-sized bed. Instead, he dropped back to his knees in front of her, gently pushed her back upon her carpeted bedroom floor, and settled himself between her legs. Then with his cock in his hand he guided himself into her center, surged forward, and filled her to the hilt.

“Luke!” Penelope screamed as she reached up and dug her nails into his back. “Oh God! Oh God! You feel so good!” She panted out as she gasped for air that she couldn’t seem to take in enough of. She bucked upward to match his pumps down into her.

“¡Carajo!” He roared out as he dropped his face to nuzzle her neck while he manically piston his hips in and out of the apex of her inner thighs. He was so lost in euphoria that he didn’t even notice the stinging pain on his back. “Tu coño está apretado!” Within a couple of moments of him thrusting into her, Luke felt the tell-tale flutters of her walls around him, which told him she was close. And he felt his balls tighten to his own impending climax.

“Oh, I’m going to come,” She sobbed out and Luke lifted his head to look down at her because he wanted to witness her expression when she did finally come. She still wore her glasses and the makeup on her face had streaks from the fresh tears that spilled from her eyes. “I am going to come so hard,” She proclaimed and he dropped his mouth to hers and kissed her deliciously deep for a few seconds before he pulled back and gazed down at her once more.

“Come for me, baby,” He huffed out and then hooked her left leg over his right arm and pushed it back to spread her more and deepen his reach to her cervix. “Simplemente dejar ir,” He whispered to her and as if her body understood his words, her orgasm struck her. Penelope gasped and growled low in her chest as she wrapped her arms tightly around his back, and buried her face in the nook of his neck to muffle her screams. Luke moved his arms and locked them around her back and his thrusting became even more frantic and bruising. He told himself he’d apologize later, and he’d run her a hot bath afterward so she can soothe any aches he may cause her. “¡Dios mío!” He cried out as his entire body convulsed from the sudden shock caused by the most intense orgasm he could ever recall having. He then collapsed breathlessly making sure to shift most of his weight just to his right, while resting his head just under her bosom. He tightened the hold he had on her in a possessive manner. “We are definitely not enemies or frienemies anymore, mi amor,” Luke stated as he kissed the soft skin of her underboob, and Penelope leaned down and kissed the top of his head in agreement. She knew that what they had just experienced together would delete all the negative terms she had ever called him. But mi amor had a very nice ring to it, she thought. Yes, that would certainly do.

And that’s the End!





The rough Spanish translation courtesy of spanishdict[dot]com
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