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Nov 03, 2006

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I have been a fan of this show since the very first episode. I especially love the chemistry between Garcia and Morgan and perfer reading their stories!!


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Too Late To Break My Heart by The New Nightingale

Rated: G • 1 Reviews Liked
Summary: One-shot. How would you feel if you found out from the grapevine that you'd missed your chance? Inspired by the end scene of Damaged. Morgan/Garcia and Garcia/Kevin.
Reviewer: Pari Signed Liked
Date: May 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thank you, Thank you, Thank you...this is exactly how I pictured it. In that eppy it was evident that Morgan was not happy to discover Kevin and Garcia were an item, and he strode off like he was hot as heck, going tog et answer from Garcia *I just wish they had played that scene out*. I loved it!! Great writing.



Kids by rogueandkurt

Rated: G • 2 Reviews Liked
Summary: Haley goes to visit Hotch, and quickly realises her mistake.
Reviewer: Pari Signed Liked
Date: May 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Kids

LOL!!! Man did you capture Reid perfectly, I can so see him doing that in an episode. Very well written. Thanks for the laugh.

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it!



Bills to pay by little_profiler

Rated: G • 2 Reviews Liked
Summary: The prompt was drunk.

Sometimes you just need to get drunk.
Reviewer: Pari Signed
Date: Jul 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wonderfully done. I can so see this happening on the show, with their job sometimes I'm sure they just want to forget. And as always Morgan is there for his 'babygirl'.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, glad you liked it.\r\n\r\nSorry, I never answered to this review - stupid me really just found out how it works. *shakes head* :)



Power of love by The Black Horse

Rated: AO: Adults Only • 103 Reviews Liked Feature
Summary: Penelope is in a serious relationship that one day turns abusive. Morgan helps her understand that it isn’t her fault that she got hit and to learn to love again.
Reviewer: Pari Signed
Date: Mar 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Salty tears

I'm going to give some constructive criticism here.This is a really good story idea, but you should send it to a beta who can help you with writing it. I found this first chapter a bit distracting in that you kept say 'Penelope', 'Penelope'. It wasn't necessary to use her name so much. use 'she' and 'her' sometimes.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review xDD



Abuela's 911 by LilP7

Rated: G • 1 Reviews Liked
Summary: Abuela Alvez sends a text to PG from Luke's phone. Hijinks and declarations of feelings ensue.
Reviewer: Pari Signed Liked
Date: Dec 21, 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was so good. I was grinning, swooning, and giddy with anticipation the entire read :)

Author's Response: Wow, thanks . This really means a lot coming from such an accomplished writer such as yourself. :-)