OOO, can't wait to see what happens next! I can't figure out whether he's going to kill her or not.

Author's Response: Hell, I can't either...and it's my damn story! I'm totally feeling this out as I go. I figure it's a good way to make suspense; if it surprises me, then it's probably going to surprise you guys. As always, thanks for stopping by. :-D

Okay, you need to update soon this is just to much of a cliffhanger! I love it but I'm going to have to check backk every day until I find out what happens next!

Author's Response: Mwahahahah...my plan is working! (That's evil laughter, in case you couldn't tell.) It's all coming down to the wire, isn't it? I want to be sure that I write this properly...which is to say I'm dying to work on it and will be jumping in as soon as I possibly can. I'm glad you're enjoying it. It's so awesome to know that someone out there is following this story. Thanks for commenting. <3

Great! More please!

Author's Response: This was a really hard chapter to write, and I'm hoping it will get a little easier from here on out. This is looking like it will shape up to be around 20,000 words, so there's a lot more on the way. Thanks so much for reading & taking the time to review. ^_^